Persuasion frameworks
Four persuasion frameworks and when to reach for each one
## PAS: Problem, Agitate, Solution
1. **Problem.** _Your API keys are scattered across `.env` files, CI configs, and Slack messages._
2. **Agitate.** _One leaked key can take down production. You won't know until a customer calls._
3. **Solution.** _Vault centralises every secret with per-environment rotation and zero-config CI integration._
Use PAS when the audience knows the pain but hasn't acted. Over-agitation is the common failure. Read it aloud. Cringe? Soften. Shrug? Sharpen.
## AIDA: Attention, Interest, Desire, Action
1. **Attention.** Interrupt the scroll. _73% of SaaS churn happens before the first "aha" moment._
2. **Interest.** Show relevance. _If onboarding takes more than one session, you're losing._
3. **Desire.** Show the outcome with proof. _Teams using Onramp cut time-to-value by 40%._
4. **Action.** One clear CTA. _See your onboarding score free._
Use AIDA for cold traffic: display ads, cold email. Skip for warm traffic.
Common failure: "Get more done with our app" tries to be Attention, Interest, and Desire at once.
## StoryBrand: Customer as hero
The customer is the hero. The product is the guide.
| Beat | Question | Example |
| ------- | ----------------------------------- | ---------------------------------------------------------------- |
| Hero | Who is the customer? | A founder who can't sleep because deploys keep failing |
| Problem | External + internal + philosophical | Broken deploys; feeling incompetent; code should ship, not haunt |
| Guide | Who helps them? | The product, positioned as the expert |
| Plan | What are the steps? | Connect repo, set alerts, deploy with confidence |
| CTA | What action do you invite? | _Start your first deploy free_ |
| Success | What does winning look like? | Ship on Friday without anxiety |
| Failure | What's at stake? | More 3 a.m. incidents, more team burnout |
Count _we/our/us_ versus _you/your_. If we-language wins, the brand is the hero.
Use StoryBrand for homepage heroes, about pages, and sales pages. Skip it on pricing pages and reference docs.
## BAB: Before, After, Bridge
1. **Before.** _You spend two hours every Monday pulling reports from four tools._
2. **After.** _Every metric, live, in one dashboard. Monday starts with decisions._
3. **Bridge.** _Metric pairs your stack in 15 minutes and surfaces the numbers that move revenue._
Use BAB when the audience wants change but needs a path. BAB assumes motivation; PAS creates it.
"Our product makes it easy" is a dead bridge. "Connect Stripe and Postgres, the dashboard is live before your coffee cools" is one the reader can picture.
## Choosing by audience temperature
| Temperature | Definition | Framework |
| ------------------ | ---------------------------- | ---------- |
| **Cold** | No context, no awareness | AIDA |
| **Problem-aware** | Knows the pain, hasn't acted | PAS |
| **Solution-aware** | Comparing alternatives | StoryBrand |
| **Motivated** | Wants change, needs a path | BAB |
Pick the framework before writing a word.